2.
Because they had spent too many time considering the new contract, the
student lost the opportunity to lease
the apartement.
Revise : Because
they had spent many time considering the new
contract, the student lost the opportunity to lease the apartement
3. These televisions are all too
expensive for we
to buy at this time, but perhaps we will return leter.
Revise: These
televisions are all too expensive for us to buy at this time, but perhaps we will return
leter.
4. After she had bought himself a
new automobile, she sold her bicycle.
Revise : After she had bought herself a new automobile, she sold her bicycle.
5. The next important question we
have to decide is when do we have to submit the proposal.
Revise : The next
important question we have to decide is when we have
to submit the proposal
6. George has not completed the
assignment yet, and Mario hasn’t neither.
Revise : George has not completed the assignment yet, and Mario hasn’t too.
7.
Jhon decide to buy in the morning a new car, but in the afternoon he
changed his mind.
Revise : Jhon decide to buy a
new car in the morning, but in the afternoon he changed his mind.
8.
Some of the plants in this store require very little care, but this one needs
much more sunlight than the others ones.
Revise : Some of the plants in
this store require very little care, but this one needs much more sunlight than
the others one.
9.
After George had returned to his house, he was reading a book.
Revise
:
After George returned to his house, he was reading a book.
10.
Many theories on conserving the purity of water has been proposed, but not
one has
been as widely eccepted as this one.
Revise : Many theories on
conserving the purity of water has been proposed, but no
one has
been as widely eccepted as this one.
11.
The food that Mark is cooking in the kitchen is smelling delicious.
Revise
:
The food that Mark’s cooking in the kitchen is smelling delicious.
12.
After Jhon eaten dinner, he wrote several
letters and went to bed.
Revise
: After Jhon dinner, he wrote several letters
and went to bed.
13.
The manager has finished working on the report last night, and now she will
begin to write the other proposal.
Revise : The manager has finished on
the report last night, and now she will begin to write the other proposal.
14.
Because Sam and Michelle had done all of the work theirselves, they were unwilling to
give the result to Joan.
Revise : Because Sam and Michelle
had done all of the work them, they were unwilling to give the result to
Joan.
15.
Daniel said that if he had to do another homework tonight, he would
not be able to
attend the concert.
Revise : Daniel said that if he
had to do another homework tonight, he would not to attend the concert.
16.
After to take the medication, the patient became drowsy and more manageable.
Revise
:
After to take the medication, the patient become drowsy and more manageable.
17.
We insist on you leaving the meeting before any further outbursts
take place.
Revise
: We
insist on you are leaving the meeting before any further outbursts take place
18.
It has been a long time since we have talked to Jhon, isn’t
it?
Revise
: It
has been a long time since we have talked to Jhon, hasn’t it?
19.
Henry objects to our buying this house without the approval of our attorney,
and Jhon does so.
Revise : Henry objects to our
buying this house without the approval of our attorney, and Jhon
too.
20.
Rita enjoyed to
be able to meet several members of congress during her vacation.
Revise : Rita enjoyed to be able to meet several members of congress
during her vacation
21. After being indicted for his
part in a bank robbery, the reputed mobster decided find another attorney.
Revise : After
being indicted for his part in a bank robbery, the reputed mobster decided found another
attorney.
22. Harry’s advisor persuaded his taking
several courses which did not involve much knowledge of mathematics.
Revise : Harry’s
advisor persuaded him to take several courses which did not involve much
knowledge of mathematics.
23. The only teacher who were
required to attend the meeting were Gorge, Betty, Jill, and me.
Revise : The
only teacher who required
to attend the meeting were Gorge, Betty, Jill, and me.
24. The work performed by these
officers are not worth our paying them any longer.
Revise
: The
work performed by these officers are not worth our paying them.
25. The president went fishing
after he has finished with the conferences.
Revise
: The president
went fishing after he had finished
with the conferences.
26.Peter and Tom plays
tennis every afternoon with Mary and me.
Revise
: Peter
and Tom playing
tennis every afternoon with Mary and me.
27.
There were
a time that I used to swim five laps every day, but now I do not
have enough time.
Revise : There was a time that I used to swim five laps every
day, but now I do not have enough time.